Matt Bellamy

This was okay. I'm not sure what you mean by "no breaks" though - it sounds a little like you wrote this just for the sake of rhyming, which rarely ...

Morgan! :) Haven't seen you around for a while. Beautifully written. I love your voice, if you know what I mean? The way you capture the scene...it's just great. Also, ...

I really like the way you described winter in this piece, I could imagine it all. However, I had a bit of a problem with it - it just doesn't ...

She tore her puppy in half? :-O Not a bad attempted at a limerick, really. But is this a real puppy we're talking about? This is quite alarming! Hehe, perhaps ...

I like this. I don't like how you capitalized every word, but I like the format, which seems to resemble rain falling. A comma or two here and there wouldn't ...

Hmm, this is good, I just think a few things need to be reworded, and I'm not quite sure how. :? I think you could omit "just" from the second ...

I've just had a look through and pointed out some suggestions that might make your poem sound a little better - no particular reason for some of these, just what ...

Adorable, a very loveable poem, and the dog sounded lovely. Some of the rhyming sounded a little forced, like "the way he'd never fail" - what does that mean? Also, ...

Haha, very cute! I don't think you need the - in Willie in the limerick, and I'd also suggest saying something like "And take a big bite" to make it ...

This is cute, although a little too simple. However, it is so short and simple that I think you could turn it into a haiku if you wanted. In case ...

I didn't think, just glancing at the second stanza, that I would like it, but I do. I really like the way it sounds, almost like it should be in ...

I love the tone to this, you have a unique poetic voice. The only thing I was unsure of was this: Love always accompanies self deceit you sang. This line ...

Great work, yet again. I think the final stanza, being shorter than the rest, and sounding so final, really summed up the poem. Also the imagery, particularly at the beginning, ...

This is an interesting idea. I like how you used personification to make the light seem like it feels like an outcast. The idea reminds me a little of November ...

I could go through all the grammatical errors here, and I will return if you really want me to. You seem to switch from third to first person which makes ...